Difference between revisions of "Talk:Sunset Coast"
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: Better: ''"The author is having difficulty with the track so development is discontinued now."'' | : Better: ''"The author is having difficulty with the track so development is discontinued now."'' | ||
: [[User:Wiimm|Wiimm]] 06:23, 28 February 2013 (UTC) | : [[User:Wiimm|Wiimm]] 06:23, 28 February 2013 (UTC) | ||
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| + | The author [[Zilla]] changed the sentence --[[User:MitsySueG24|MitsySueG24]] 12:47, 28 February 2013 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 12:47, 28 February 2013
- Cite: "The author is having difficulty with the track so the author is working on another track."
- Is this (second part of sentence) a relevant information for a track page? I think, it isn't!
- Better: "The author is having difficulty with the track so development is discontinued now."
- Wiimm 06:23, 28 February 2013 (UTC)
The author Zilla changed the sentence --MitsySueG24 12:47, 28 February 2013 (UTC)